'Finding Self' revision draft 1
I'm pretty happy with how heavily I revised my writing since last semester. I do feel I need to work on cleaning up (I may have been -that means I was- too repetitive with the wording) and also need work on integrating support text and images into the body of the paper.
Any peers that want to leave feedback, suggestions, praises, or otherwise opinions feel free, I know we don't really get to go over our written work together as much as our studio work...
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